Prophecy

From the concept in my post Tuesday Discussion I spoke about having a prophecy in books. How it can be used as a foreshadowing technique or outline the plot for a chosen one.

I wrote a prophecy for my current novel. After doing some research and discussion I am confused whether I should or not.

Here it is below, please comment and let me know what you think. Whether it should be included, if it needs some tweaking or remove it.

 

A blue moon will freeze time.

Shadows shall move mountains

and burn rivers;

Beasts will flow

through untrod land.

An end will begin

when a life is born.

 

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